I woke up to the sound of my alarm buzzing next to my head. I jumped out of bed disrupting the peaceful silence but I didn't mind I was ten. I ran up to my parent's room. I through the door open and jumped on the bed rousing them of there slumber presents presents I half shouted in my eager anticipation dad laughed and eased out of bed and told me to stay with mum while he went to get my presents after what seemed like an eternity came back telling me to close my eyes then after what seemed like hours I felt a wet thing lap at my face I opened my eyes to find a beautiful puppy . dad suggested that we should get dressed so we could take her for a walk at the park, that we can see her personality and give her a name that suits her.
when we got to the park I opened the door and she ran out and before I could react I saw a man grab her. I called out but I was too late
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