Friday, 24 May 2019
the letter
The lead of my pencil scraped across my page creating a annoying sound and fracturing the calm silence I hurt a boy today I made him cry I said to my self, I feel as if the whole wolds anger is pushing down on me keeping me trapped in my web of guilt. One small tear slid down my check I hated it at that moment for its pure innocence and honesty. I worried about what I could put into my letter to tell that boy that I didn't mean to hurt him, and that it hurt me just as much if not more because you wound will heal over time and all you will have left is just bitter memories of me were as this will haunt me for the rest of my life . I just want to tell that boy that I'm sorry so sorry. The end
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I think it very good
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. There was an amazing hook that made me want to keep on reading it. You used some really good descriptive words. Just keep on doing what you are doing because it is really good.
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