Wow! You have used some great description in this piece of writing. I really like the words mercilessly and unimaginable as they help create an image of what you are writing about. For your blog post title, you could change it to the title that you would actually give to your piece of writing. I think that would really encourage your potential audience to keep reading.
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that was... depressing. very good :)
ReplyDeleteWow! You have used some great description in this piece of writing. I really like the words mercilessly and unimaginable as they help create an image of what you are writing about. For your blog post title, you could change it to the title that you would actually give to your piece of writing. I think that would really encourage your potential audience to keep reading.
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